Best song i have ever created in my entire life

[baradien]

Just wanna show you guys one of my best created songs so far.
You can also tell your own opinion here.

Neverlands dreams

[Blue]

Are you serious? You did better before imo.

In minute 3 it gets really offsync. Is this intended?

Song in a whole lacks structure like intro, break, outro. Please see http://www.tranceproduction.com/getting ... cture.html for a start. There has to be some tension in it to make it interesting and exciting and not boring.

You should also really work on making percussion more interesting, theres no change over the whole song. See this example for how to create a uprising tension http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4moxxf_sI0

Bassline seems missing.

Some other examples by you which might have potential:
https://soundcloud.com/elrawen-sela/elr ... eling-safe
https://soundcloud.com/elrawen-sela/elr ... -title-yet (dunno, somehow a lot of energy in it, you should work on it)
https://soundcloud.com/elrawen-sela/elr ... the-angels
https://soundcloud.com/elrawen-sela/looking-for-it-name (looking for a name? how about "Avicii" )
https://soundcloud.com/elrawen-sela/dj- ... never-ends
https://soundcloud.com/elrawen-sela/dj- ... agic-world

[baradien]

Oh well non best song

I could aways edit it ^^.

Thanks for the link will diffenly check it out. Well there was someone who sended about this song though he really likes and said keep doing your job

[baradien]

sorry to bump my topic. it is not about the best song. But i didn't wanted to created another topic. Otherwise you see a list of them. So yeah i created another song. But with webgl + Audio Web api. I did took a template and someone his visualizer because i am still a noob in it. but all together it works pretty well. I love the guy who worked on the visuals.

But it plays one of my new songs i am currently working on.

http://elrawentest.gweb.io/

Webgl + html5 is being used more and more. so yeah

[Blue]

Sounds good. A lot better than your previous attempts
Visuals are neat and fit.

[Etaew]

Yeah that isn't bad.

[baradien]

well yeah we getting better in everything. and thanks btw